tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2286561322049856387.post3552156278230360379..comments2023-11-05T01:01:37.577-07:00Comments on Faerie Book Loft: Six Sentence SundaysSunnihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12671891696662548892noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2286561322049856387.post-45036388199519900102012-11-11T13:01:36.097-08:002012-11-11T13:01:36.097-08:00Hi Karysa,
I meant that sentence to convey she ha...Hi Karysa,<br /><br />I meant that sentence to convey she had a lot on her mind. <br /><br />This is part of a WIP and I can see I'll probably have to use different words in places. I'll probably be changing a lot of things after I get this initial draft written. Thanks for pointing that out - I do want it to be clear to the reader.<br /><br />And thanks for reading and commenting. That always helps.<br /><br />SunniSunnihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12671891696662548892noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2286561322049856387.post-28796891949780685422012-11-11T10:50:32.006-08:002012-11-11T10:50:32.006-08:00Beautiful imagery. I was just a little confused wi...Beautiful imagery. I was just a little confused with the last line - were her thoughts reeling? Karysa Fairehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09519776785650008126noreply@blogger.com