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This is what I’m working on right now with my first mystery
book, so I’m making an effort to cover all my bases by reading a lot of good
hints about “do’s” and “don’ts. I came
across a good blog by an author living in the England , Mike Wells. Reading this interesting post may help you
avoid the pitfalls you can plunge into while revising your book.
Story is not as advertised.
Too many characters introduced too quickly.
No clear-cut point of view.
Story has no distinct main character.
Too much bio/back-story info is presented.
Flashbacks used too often and/or too early.
Opening scenes lack enough tension to pull the reader along.
One or more scenes do not advance the plot.
Reader cannot emotionally connect with the main character.
Too many seemingly unrelated plot threads.
Narrative is description-heavy.
Description is loaded with “purple prose,” particularly the
opening paragraphs.
Dialogue is not interactive enough.
Story starts too quickly.
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